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雅思寫作大作文范文分析:對電影投資

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題目:Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?


Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?


翻譯:和本地電影相比,很多人喜歡看外國電影,這是因為什么呢?政府是否應該增加對當地電影產業的撥款


話題:社會類-電影-政府投資


類型:混合類


關鍵詞:foreign films,locally produced films


分析:


拿到這種混合類的題目,大家不要慌,一個問題一個主體段即可哦。


也就是說結構應為:


開頭段:引出話題+引出下文(包含兩個要點1.This essay 會講具體原因 2. 我個人認為政府應該/不應該給更多贊助)


主體1段:原因段


主體2段:寫你認為應該/不應該的理由


結尾:總結+重述觀點


觀點方面:可能很多考生本人都是國外電影的愛好者,說道漫威宇宙就激動,肖申克的救贖就是對我的救贖,宇宙觀的啟蒙是星際穿越,哈利波特是我的童年,男神都是王牌特工,看到我家小狗的眼神就想起忠犬八公。國外電影對本土電影的沖擊力真的是不小?,F在中國的電影行業也蒸蒸日上,拍出了很多非常經典的電影,但是這道題目的先決設定就是很多人更愛看外國電影,所以我們要找到一些可以寫的外國電影比本國電影好的點,比如:


1. locally made films in many countries lack better plots and the characters do not have the necessary depth to touch the hearts of the audiences ( 很多國家的本土電影情節簡單,缺乏深度)


在論證時,我們可以采用舉例論證,如:


large film industries like the Hollywood can allocate a huge budget and have talented producers and directors while films made in developing countries have a small amount to spend on a movie and do not have many talented movie makers.


2. overseas films have higher quality in terms of visual effects and audio(國外電影的視覺效果和音效可能更好)


在論證時,同樣可以采取舉例論證:


For instances, films such as Batman or Spiderman had been watched by people all over the world, due to their sophisticated digital effects.


以上提供給大家的這些例子都可以記下來,在考場上使用哦,還有部分科技改變生活的題目也可以使用這些例子。


那么到底政府是否應該出資呢?


如果我們寫不應該的話,我們就需要去論證一下政府錢有限,應該投在更重要的領域,如教育或醫療,也就是咱們這一整段都要圍繞著教育醫療為什么比電影重要去探討。


如果寫應該,那么就可以寫防止人才流失,每個國家都有優秀的電影從業者,但是因為資金力度不夠,不愿意從事這個行業,或無法取得好的成果,如果政府愿意投資一些的話會更容易出成績,更好的吸引人才,更好的宣傳文化。


Each country has some talented producers, actors and filmmakers who for the lack of financial and political support cannot bring out the best.


No doubt big budget is required to make better quality films and the government should provide subsidiary to help local film industry progress.


寫應該比寫不應該更不容易跑題,寫不應該需要注意把握尺度,不要寫偏題,不要變成長篇大論證明教育和醫療為什么重要了。


好啦,分析了這么多,你是不是有思路了呢,來咱們看看今天的精選范文:


It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidizing(補貼,贊助) the industry.


(開頭段簡明扼要,兩句話,注意對local film進行了替換,使用了domestic Domestic - 形容詞:國內的,本國的,如:domestic flights/airport- 國內航班/機場;Domestic也可表示家庭的,家用的,如: domestic appliances -家用小電器。在雅思閱讀中,大家還會碰到domestic表示家養的,飼養的的意思和wild成反義如domestic cat-家養貓)


There are various reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries. Firstly, the established film industries in certain countries have huge budgets(預算,資金-詞匯替換) for action, special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations. Hollywood blockbusters like ‘Avatar’ or the James Bond films are examples of(舉例論證,xxx are examples of xxx) such productions, and their global appeal is undeniable. Another reason why these big-budget films are so successful is that they often star the most famous actors and actresses, and they are made by the most accomplished producers and directors(這個修飾用的特別好,accomplished-形容詞,才華突出的,技藝高超的,我們可以用這個詞形容某個行業中厲害的人如:an accomplished chef-技藝高超的廚師). The poor quality, low-budget filmmaking in many countries suffers in comparison(對比論證寫法2 ;xxx suffers in comparison. 


就是A是這樣的,A怎么怎么好,寫一些關于A好的論證,在結尾處加一句說 B suffers in comparison- 意思就是B沒法和A比,B沒有A的這些優點).


(主體1段-原因段給了兩個原因:1是觀影效果好,原因2是明星效應。 結構-主題句+分論點1+分論點2)


In my view, governments should support local film industries financially. (觀點)In every country, there may be talented amateur(業余愛好者) film-makers who just need to be given the opportunity to prove themselves. To compete with big-budget productions from overseas, these people need money to pay for film crews, actors and a host of other costs related to producing high-quality films. If governments did help with these costs, they would see an increase in employment in the film industry, income from film sales, and perhaps even a rise in tourist numbers. (解釋)New Zealand, for example, has seen an increase in tourism related to the 'Lord of the Rings' films, which were partly funded by government subsidies(舉例).


(主體2段-是否應該投入更多資金,作者觀點-應該,指出了缺錢的事實+投錢的好處。結構為:觀點-解釋-舉例)


In conclusion, I believe that increased financial support could help to raise the quality of locally made films and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market(主導市場,占據市場).


(結尾段:總結+重申觀點)


好詞:


注意這個文章中用到了很多“資金”的說法,總結一下如下:


Fund: 名詞-資金(可數)可以寫復數,如government funds, short of funds.


也可做動詞-資助, 如:The school is being funded by the government.


Subsidize: 動詞-資助,發放津貼,如….is subsidized by the government.


Budget: 名詞-預算,如,a monthly budge -每月預算 , the education budge 教育預算


Within budget- 沒有超出預算


Over budget-超出預算


Support….financially/ financial support – 經濟支持


好啦,以上就是今天的精選范文,希望大家在家里都能踏踏實實的認真復習,管住自己,過有自制力的高效人生。


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